I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Miss Bunting, Mrs Lee and Miss Ferguson. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, they will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, May 12, 2021
Taniwha Trouble
WALT:evaluate ideas and information in a narrative text.
Hello bloggers! Today and this week i have been learning about Taniwhas and where they live
This story is fun and it would definitely be in my top 5 story
this story is about Taniwhas, Taniwhas are sea creatures/monsters
Hello bloggers! Today and this week i have been learning about Taniwhas and where they live.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Dwayne I liked your work it was good I loved how you showed what happened and and something for next time add a background that describes the story!
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