Hey guys This week i have been learning about Matariki! here are my create tasks hope you like them!
WALT: summaries and analyse ides and information from different texts.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Miss Bunting, Mrs Lee and Miss Ferguson. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, they will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey guys This week i have been learning about Matariki! here are my create tasks hope you like them!
WALT: summaries and analyse ides and information from different texts.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hello Dwayne Krishay here and here is some feedback and things to do next time so firsst feed back for next time so first you should add more4 pages with more information so the person reading will getb more addicted to the text and He or She feels so motivated that they want it to not end but obviously it will end we are not robots so try to add more and also I like your background and you have edited pretty hard on your text so 10/10 like I normally see on your blog creativity your cerativity is 10/10 background 10/10. bye! By Krishay
ReplyDeleteThanks Krishay I also commented on yours and I think your one is awesome, thanks for commenting on my blog. But what a coincidence because I commented on yours then you commented on mine. Thanks for commenting on mine and next time ill have 4 pages for more information!
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